My Mum's Hands

This week's writing task was a free-verse poem about "my Mum´s Hands".  We 

practised using semi-colons, a range of sentence lengths and using better Vocabulary. Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell. I chose to write about my Mum because she is someone special to me.

 My Mum's Hands

are soft baby hands;

her back, Steady wall;

her legs, Fast twigs.

Her laugh is soft and pale;

her breath, dust like the wind.

Slepping

quietly and steady in my arms,

my mum

is the kindest person in the world.